Although not every body would agree, I want to argue that





I have several reasons for arguing for this point of view. 
My first reason is





A further reason is









Furthermore








Therefore, although some people argue that                                           


I think I have shown that






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I think that 


because



The reasons for my thinking this are, firstly



so



Another reason is





Moreover






because







These  (facts/arguments/ideas) show that





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I would like to persuade you that 





There are several points I want to make to support my point of view. 

Firstly








































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